
by Katy Munger, 2016 Piedmont Laureate
One of the great joys of working with young authors is that their voices have yet to be shaped by disappointment, cynicism, or the expectations of strangers. Their imaginations are still on overdrive, unsquelched by the weight of everyday responsibilities, and they give voice to their imaginations with a delightful and unadorned boldness.
I was reminded of this over the past month as I read through the submissions of a young writers contest the Piedmont Laureate program sponsored at www.summersleuths.org. The assignment was to write a mystery or crime fiction short story and a few prompts were provided to get kids thinking. But most of the authors opted to submit stories based on their ideas. I was blown away by their creativity as well as the quality of their writing.
Sometimes the subjects were familiar: being late for school, moving to a new town, or the usual fears of childhood like fitting in or losing a pet. But they approached these topics with such elan and a cheerful enthusiasm for catching the bad guys that real law enforcement can only hope to emulate. Bus drivers, little old ladies, jealous friends, and others became villains, but many of the authors pointed out that, at heart, these villains still had good in them. Just as often, they would write about a situation where they were afraid of something, only to reveal later that they had simply misinterpreted what was going on. I love this view of the world: that no one is all bad and that we all have the resilience to overcome our fears. We just have to adjust the way we look at them.
Nearly all of the young writers excelled at creating a mood in their stories. One atmospheric submission spoke of monsters outside the window, describing a gradual increase of fear with a sparse, moody elegance I greatly admired. Other stories captured the loneliness that comes with being new to a classroom or town, or the loving interplay between child and parent. Are you wondering whether kids really hear what you say to them? Wonder no more: their ear for dialogue is astonishing.
These are kids who are paying attention to the world. These are young authors who are learning from what they see. I would take nine billion of them.
Some stories were concise, others ran on and on -– leaping into different time periods and new worlds with endless energy and unpredictable creativity. May every page I write have that much joie de vivre. We could all use a little excess.
One young man even wrote a beautiful homage to British police procedurals; I wanted to call up his parents and salute them on their television watching policies. He captured the loneliness of responsibility that comes with being a senior detective who makes the decisions, the aching fear of making the wrong decision, and the price that comes with making a mistake. Somehow, this young man conveyed the essence of many a PBS series and he’s just 11 years old. Well done. He’s not just observing the world, he is absorbing it.
And unlike adults, faced with a crime, these young writers were not so concerned with dispensing justice. Bad guys might be captured, but they weren’t necessarily punished. There was little need for retribution. I rather liked this relaxed approach to good and evil. It signified a belief in the universe and its own ability to balance good and evil that I would like to embrace.
Most of all, I came away impressed with the power that stories have on our lives. These are young people raised on narratives everywhere they look, from the television commercials they see to the subjects they are taught in school, to the endless parade of books, movies, and shows that have shaped their lives. This consumption of stories has clearly made them storytellers — the advanced structures of these stories show this clearly. That gave me hope and underscored my belief that, going forward, in a world of sound bites, it will be shared stories that bind us.


Sometime over the past two weeks, my staring contest with the unfinished books piling up on my computer’s hard drive ended. It started quietly enough. I woke up unexpectedly at 5:00 AM one morning, wide awake as a lemur, head swimming in ideas, and figured I may as well take a peek at the outline for one of those works-in-progress. Two hours later, a new outline had emerged, I felt blissfully balanced, and I was heading for the shower to start my day.
This is not out of any personal need for revenge, mind you. Like Fern in Charlotte’s Web, I was born with a keen sense of injustice in the world. Or rather, it probably developed soon after I was born due to the fact that I had five siblings. When you are one of six kids, believe me, the injustice of someone else getting a bigger piece of pie than you or hogging the best seat in the car all the way from Virginia to Maine starts to seem pretty damn important. I still have the scars from scratch marks on my arm to prove it. This hyper sense of fairness followed me into adulthood. I try to treat other people with kindness and respect, but there is nothing I like less than people who break the rules and take advantage of other people’s good intentions for their personal gain. So I notice when other people behave badly — and I make it my job to even the score, if only a little.
Is it the perfect modern novel? No, and its mixed reviews make that clear. I myself kept reading, with some bemusement, as she slid inadvertently into a true omniscient viewpoint in one chapter and then had to scramble to find a graceful way out, given she was juggling dozens of characters. But it is a great book for other writers to read, with an eye out for recognizing how authors need to communicate to readers whose storytelling preferences have been shaped by more visual media. Rowling has taken popular story expectations (a plot full of surprises, somewhat iconic characters, and a hero’s myth structure) and she has met them all. But at the same time, Rowling also uses the written medium and her own narrative voice to provide depth that more visual mediums lack, especially when it comes to the characters. She has then, rather fearlessly —given the world’s expectations for her at the time she wrote The Casual Vacancy — overlaid the story with her own personal style and values, creating a book that most definitely has her in it. Instead of imitating other writers or attempting to imitate television or movies, she has created a book that only she could have written and one that is deeply moving in many respects as a result.